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Page 003 by Letdragon Page 003 by Letdragon
I think I went for a few too many close-ups on these pages. On another note, it's funny for me to say this, but this could easily be seen as another episode of At Home. I need to get to introducing the other protagonists at school soon.
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:iconthegreatmatsutzu:
Aww, poor Ryuu-kun. He seems in quite a bit of distress, I'm glad he has a friend like that^^

I really enjoyed his face expressions on this page ^^
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:iconletdragon:
Thank you, that's what I was trying to focus on here :)
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Fury1031 Sep 9, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I believe the close-ups actually suit this page, and I actually like how the faces are cut off at the top

...oh and FAVE!!
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:iconletdragon:
Seems no one else does though. I should try again >>
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Fury1031 Sep 9, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
well, you'll keep improving, I'm sure^^ I do like it though *hugs* can't wait to see how the story unfolds
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Ravenfire5 Sep 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
the first panel kind of bothers me, in a comic you almost never cut the character off just above the chin, it looks awkward that way, but otherwise this is good, nice job with the expressions and i like the last panel.
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:iconletdragon:
I feel like Ryuu-kun's snout would take up too much space, so I cut it off there on purpose
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Ravenfire5 Sep 10, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
oh, still better to draw the whole head though.
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:iconletdragon:
All right I got it
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Ravenfire5 Sep 11, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
okay
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